Poetry Appreciation (do NOT post your own poetry)

Discussion in 'In the Media' started by Tamstrong, Feb 5, 2011.

  1. wtarshi

    wtarshi Well-Known Member

    Nature's first green is gold,
    Her hardest hue to hold.
    Her early leaf's a flower;
    But only so an hour.
    Then leaf subsides to leaf.
    So Eden sank to grief,
    So dawn goes down to day.
    Nothing gold can stay.

    - Robert Frost
     
  2. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    The feelings he expressed in these lyrics always felt so familiar to me.
     
  3. Ra

    Ra Well-Known Member


    This is an actual poem he wrote. One of many that he wrote. If you have never checked it out find a book called The Rose That Grew From Concrete. It's a book with the collection poems that were written by Tupac during his life and was put together and published after his death.
     
  4. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Letitgo by Prince

    Ready or not, here I come
    All my life I've kept my feelings deep inside
    Never was a reason 2 let somebody know
    Lover here, lover there - Who cried? Who cared? Foolish pride
    Never was a good seat at any of this man's shows

    Until now all I wanted 2 do is
    Do do do what I do, and
    Bang bang bang on the drummer
    And love so-and-so

    But now I've got 2 letitgo (letitgo)
    Lay back and let the vibe just flow
    I wanna just letitgo (letitgo)
    Lay back and let my feelings show
    I'm ready 4 the real
    Give me something I can feel

    All my life this heart's been under lock and key
    My curtains were drawn there wasn't nobody home
    Trigger here, Trigger there - everybody's high except 4 me
    Better off dead if I couldn't be alone

    Until now all I wanted 2 do is
    Do do do what I do, and
    Bang bang bang on the drummer
    And love so-and-so

    But now I've got 2 letitgo (letitgo)
    Lay back and let the vibe just flow
    I wanna just letitgo (letitgo)
    Lay back and let my feelings show
    I, I'm ready 4 the real
    Give me something I can feel

    4teen years and tears I've longed 2 sing my song
    But a horse couldn't drag your ass 2 put me on
    But now I've got an army and we're three million strong
    This song will ring in your ears when we are gone

    Until now all I wanted 2 do is
    Do do do what I do, and
    Bang bang bang on the drummer
    And love so-and-so

    But now I want 2 letitgo (letitgo)
    Lay back and let the vibe just flow
    Said I want 2 letitgo (letitgo)
    Lay back and let the feelings show

    I am ready 4 the real (Come a little closer)

    Letitgo
    Lay back an' let the vibe just flow
     
  5. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    I've heard about, but haven't gotten around to finding it yet. I've just seen random copies of his poems from the book here & there. I hope I can get my stuff out there before I'm dead. Of course I'm not Tupac, so my stuff wouldn't matter anyway.
     
  6. Ra

    Ra Well-Known Member



    If you write, then what you write matters. If you ever put something together and get it published and just only one person is touched by what you have written then it matters. Always remember that and never stop thinking that your words and thoughts matter.
     
  7. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    You've got a good point. It's just sad to me that more people don't appreciate & understand the value of good poetry. Like I said in the original post, poetry is extremely underrated; people don't know what they're missing IMO.

    I've thought about posting my stuff on here, but I'm not comfortable putting it on a public forum. I've had someone try to steal my writing before. Thankfully it was already copyrighted & the place she submitted to knew she didn't write it.
     
  8. Ra

    Ra Well-Known Member




    I'm like that as well with the bit of sci-fi & superhero related ideas that I have written down or drawn. I've got a few ideas for superheroes that I've had since I was in junior high that I wouldn't mind doing something with and since there are not that many sci-fi or fantasy related book series with black protaganist in them I have a couple of ideas in that area that I've thought about taking a chance with. Still have hopes of one day doing them and seeing them put out there for the public even if they don't become highly successful in any way. Just to say I did something I dreamed about doing since I was a child would be satisfaction enough.
     
  9. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    I hope you accomplish that one of these days; it would be awesome. The few drawings you posted show just how much talent you have, & I know you have a vivid imagination. I've also wanted to be published from the about that age. I've had a few things published & made a tiny amount of money on some of it, BUT it's like you said, just doing something you've dreamed about doing would be satisfaction enough. Of all the things I've ever wanted to do, writing was/is my dream more than anything.
     
  10. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    There Is Lonely by Prince

    Is it me or did the room just get darker?
    Is it me or did I just lay down and die?
    Is this a dream or did the world just crumble at my very feet?
    How in heaven will I ever be alright?

    There is lonely and there is lonely
    And then there is how I feel right now
    Perhaps only Cain when he'd slain his brother
    Could ever come close 2 knowing how ... yeah

    There is lonely and there is lonely
    And then there is how I feel right now
    Perhaps only Cain when he'd slain his brother
    Could ever come close 2 knowing how

    There is lonely and there is lonely
    And then there is how I feel right now
     
  11. naija4real

    naija4real New Member

    The Awakening Age - Ben Okri

    The Awakening Age
    Ben Okri

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    O ye who travel the meridian line,
    May the vision of a new world within you shine.

    May eyes that have lived with poverty's rage,
    See through to the glory of the awakening age.

    For we are all richly linked in hope,
    Woven in history, like a mountain rope.

    Together we can ascend to a new height,
    Guided by our heart's clearest light.

    When perceptions are changed there's much to gain,
    A flowering of truth instead of pain.

    There's more to a people than their poverty;
    There's their work, wisdom, and creativity.

    Along the line may our lives rhyme,
    To make a loving harvest of space and time
     
  12. naija4real

    naija4real New Member

    Abiku - Wole Soyinka

    Wanderer child. It is the same child who dies and
    returns again and again to plague the mother.
    -Yoruba belief


    Abiku

    In vain your bangles cast
    Charmed circles at my feet
    I am Abiku, calling for the first
    And repeated time.

    Must I weep for goats and cowries
    For palm oil and sprinkled ask?
    Yams do not sprout amulets
    To earth Abiku's limbs.

    So when the snail is burnt in his shell,
    Whet the heated fragment, brand me
    Deeply on the breast - you must know him
    When Abiku calls again.

    I am the squirrel teeth, cracked
    The riddle of the palm; remember
    This, and dig me deeper still into
    The god's swollen foot.

    Once and the repeated time, ageless
    Though I puke, and when you pour
    Libations, each finger points me near
    The way I came, where

    The ground is wet with mourning
    White dew suckles flesh-birds
    Evening befriends the spider, trapping
    Flies in wine-froth;

    Night, and Abiku sucks the oil
    From lamps. Mothers! I'll be the
    Suppliant snake coiled on the doorstep
    Yours the killing cry.

    The ripest fruit was saddest
    Where I crept, the warmth was cloying.
    In silence of webs, Abiku moans, shaping
    Mounds from the yolk.

    Written by Wole Soyinka


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  13. empyrium

    empyrium New Member

    When shadows grow longer - Schwadorf

    When shadows grow longer
    and the sun sets for the forthcoming night;
    our sorrow is stronger
    as darkness and death are now near by our side.

    Many a sun will set
    and tears of grief will be shed.
     
  14. Loki

    Loki Well-Known Member

    This poem has deep meaning in my life, take the road less traveled by, it will always serve you well....

    Robert Frost

    The Road Not Taken


    Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
    And sorry I could not travel both
    And be one traveler, long I stood
    And looked down one as far as I could
    To where it bent in the undergrowth;

    Then took the other, as just as fair,
    And having perhaps the better claim,
    Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
    Though as for that the passing there
    Had worn them really about the same,

    And both that morning equally lay
    In leaves no step had trodden black.
    Oh, I kept the first for another day!
    Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
    I doubted if I should ever come back.

    I shall be telling this with a sigh
    Somewhere ages and ages hence:
    Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
    I took the one less traveled by,
    And that has made all the difference.
     
  15. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    Evening Solace by Charlotte Bronte

    The human heart has hidden treasures,
    In secret kept, in silence sealed;*
    The thoughts, the hopes, the dreams, the pleasures,
    Whose charms were broken if revealed.
    And days may pass in gay confusion,
    And nights in rosy riot fly,
    While, lost in Fame's or Wealth's illusion,
    The memory of the Past may die.

    But, there are hours of lonely musing,
    Such as in evening silence come,
    When, soft as birds their pinions closing,
    The heart's best feelings gather home.
    Then in our souls there seems to languish
    A tender grief that is not woe;
    And thoughts that once wrung groans of anguish,
    Now cause but some mild tears to flow.

    And feelings, once as strong as passions,
    Float softly back*a faded dream;
    Our own sharp griefs and wild sensations,
    The tale of others' sufferings seem.
    Oh ! when the heart is freshly bleeding,
    How longs it for that time to be,
    When, through the mist of years receding,
    Its woes but live in reverie !

    And it can dwell on moonlight glimmer,
    On evening shade and loneliness;
    And, while the sky grows dim and dimmer,
    Feel no untold and strange distress*
    Only a deeper impulse given
    By lonely hour and darkened room,
    To solemn thoughts that soar to heaven,
    Seeking a life and world to come.
     
  16. Tamstrong

    Tamstrong Administrator Staff Member

    RESTLESS by Kate Burnside


    Liquid like tears,
    thin and transparent
    like sensitive skin,
    sleepless is a stream I can’t escape,
    a ceaseless tide washing to and fro
    anchoring me in murky beds.

    Upsteam, downstream,
    its surface breeze slips effortless
    between banks of waking and asleep,
    leaving me here stranded.

    Would I could instead dive deep,
    hold my breath and then emerge
    with precious pearl of heaviness
    weighting me to rest.

    Contented sigh of slumber beside me
    like a single free bird
    passes lightly overhead,
    leaving my sky emptier and more lonely
    than the darkest starless night
     
  17. TheHuntress

    TheHuntress Well-Known Member

    This is one of my faves... and it's meant to be tongue-in-cheek. I think I posted it once before somewhere on this site, but not in the poetry thread.

    "Bloodbath"
    Christian Drake- Copyright 2005

    And it came in like the barking of dogs in your belly,
    the lunatic dogs that bark every full moon on the dot.
    The clock in you unwound, the little room collapsed,
    and the blood trickled out in a thin red ribbon,
    licking the white sheets.
    They call it a period, but it’s really a run-on sentence
    babbling on all week. It’s the definition of womanhood
    reduced by repetition to the tedium of tampon commercials,
    punchlines, and the day-long math test of cramps
    shooting through you like swimmer’s stitches
    while you’re in the middle of the river.
    And I watch you fight to swim to the other side
    of the bed, kicking, gasping hard between gulps of chamomile tea.
    But when the blood is calm, it is beautiful
    as a bone-handled knife. It dreams, and as it dreams
    it drools like a baby. It’s the drip-drip of a faucet
    as we go to sleep, it’s a bee beating itself against the glass.
    It’s a presence, not like a ghost but like a memory
    in your skin, changing the pitch and timbre
    of your body to my ear as I pull my fingers across
    your belly and you find my lips in the dark like a magnet
    and I slip my fingers through your hair as gently as thoughts
    and you say,
    "Baby, not tonight. I’m on my period."
    And I say,

    Baby, I will make love to you until we look like a war zone.
    Give me the sweet murder of your body
    until they string up crime scene tape across the bedroom,
    because period sex is awesome.
    I will love you like surgery and I will transplant your heart.
    I will love you like a horror movie,
    ’cause it’s about to be a bloodbath in here.
    Because I need a hot transfusion of your love, type A-positive
    because you can’t B-negative when I’m giving you my O, O, O…
    I want to surf your crimson wave,
    and invite your Aunt Flow for a threesome.
    I want to reverse your curse, because the Red Sox are in town.
    I want to make this a "special time."
    I want to put my submarine in your Red Sea
    and hunt for Red October, and do not hesitate
    to ask me to go snorkeling down there.
    Because if I’m going to order the finest steak,
    I’m going to eat it rare.
    Yeah, because I crave the taste of blood,
    and I want your nerves raw like a bullet wound valentine.
    And whether it’s hard or sweet, we’re going to leave
    Rorscharchs on the sheets
    and handprints on the walls.
    So throw that tampon in the air like a cotton Sputnik, just lob it,
    ’cause in the end, I want to be bloodier than John Wayne Bobbitt.
    Your time of the month has perfect timing
    because you open like the elevator doors in "The Shining."
    I like some ketchup when I’m dining,
    but I want to taste copper like I’m dying.
    So let the woman in you make a man out of me.
    Let’s get unclean. Because this lovemaking is no less perfect
    than the moon rising in you, and this lovemaking is the gospel music
    made by the rhythm of flesh and blood and flesh and blood,
    and this blood is the closest I will ever be to making love
    to your insides, sailing through your veins and arteries.
    This blood on my skin is the photograph I take
    when I visit your heart.
     
  18. Loki

    Loki Well-Known Member

    Selected parts of this poem are in the closing dialogue in "Thurgood" the one man play by Laurence Fishburne currently playing (brilliant play by the way, highly recommend watching) on HBO, it documents the life and times of Thurgood Marshall a college classmate of Langston's.

    Let America Be America Again by Langston Hughes
    Let America be America again.
    Let it be the dream it used to be.
    Let it be the pioneer on the plain
    Seeking a home where he himself is free.

    (America never was America to me.)

    Let America be the dream the dreamers dreamed--
    Let it be that great strong land of love
    Where never kings connive nor tyrants scheme
    That any man be crushed by one above.

    (It never was America to me.)

    O, let my land be a land where Liberty
    Is crowned with no false patriotic wreath,
    But opportunity is real, and life is free,
    Equality is in the air we breathe.

    (There's never been equality for me,
    Nor freedom in this "homeland of the free.")

    Say, who are you that mumbles in the dark?
    And who are you that draws your veil across the stars?


    I am the poor white, fooled and pushed apart,
    I am the Negro bearing slavery's scars.
    I am the red man driven from the land,
    I am the immigrant clutching the hope I seek--
    And finding only the same old stupid plan
    Of dog eat dog, of mighty crush the weak.

    I am the young man, full of strength and hope,
    Tangled in that ancient endless chain
    Of profit, power, gain, of grab the land!
    Of grab the gold! Of grab the ways of satisfying need!
    Of work the men! Of take the pay!
    Of owning everything for one's own greed!

    I am the farmer, bondsman to the soil.
    I am the worker sold to the machine.
    I am the Negro, servant to you all.
    I am the people, humble, hungry, mean--
    Hungry yet today despite the dream.
    Beaten yet today--O, Pioneers!
    I am the man who never got ahead,
    The poorest worker bartered through the years.

    Yet I'm the one who dreamt our basic dream
    In the Old World while still a serf of kings,
    Who dreamt a dream so strong, so brave, so true,
    That even yet its mighty daring sings
    In every brick and stone, in every furrow turned
    That's made America the land it has become.
    O, I'm the man who sailed those early seas
    In search of what I meant to be my home--
    For I'm the one who left dark Ireland's shore,
    And Poland's plain, and England's grassy lea,
    And torn from Black Africa's strand I came
    To build a "homeland of the free."

    The free?

    Who said the free? Not me?
    Surely not me? The millions on relief today?
    The millions shot down when we strike?
    The millions who have nothing for our pay?
    For all the dreams we've dreamed
    And all the songs we've sung
    And all the hopes we've held
    And all the flags we've hung,
    The millions who have nothing for our pay--
    Except the dream that's almost dead today.

    O, let America be America again--
    The land that never has been yet--
    And yet must be--the land where every man is free.
    The land that's mine--the poor man's, Indian's, Negro's, ME--
    Who made America,
    Whose sweat and blood, whose faith and pain,
    Whose hand at the foundry, whose plow in the rain,
    Must bring back our mighty dream again.

    Sure, call me any ugly name you choose--
    The steel of freedom does not stain.
    From those who live like leeches on the people's lives,
    We must take back our land again,
    America!
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    O, yes,
    I say it plain,
    America never was America to me,
    And yet I swear this oath--
    America will be!

    Out of the rack and ruin of our gangster death,
    The rape and rot of graft, and stealth, and lies,
    We, the people, must redeem
    The land, the mines, the plants, the rivers.
    The mountains and the endless plain--
    All, all the stretch of these great green states--
    And make America again!
     
  19. OpenHeart

    OpenHeart New Member

    In The Afterglow


    She lay serenely in the afterglow
    The sweat of passion spent
    Vaporized and no more

    Her hair tousled, frames a peaceful face
    The red glow of the cheeks still visible
    Her eyes resting, her mouth open slightly
    Her full lips still moist, her pale skin smooth

    No hint remains of what passed
    The contortions of orgasm
    Which were etched into her innocent face
    Linger no more but shall again soon

    She lies beneath a silken sheet
    Stretched more tightly across her breasts
    Showing them in sharp relief
    The cool air from the open window

    Arouses her nipples
    Which stand proud through the silk
    She murmurs in her sleep and squirms in unison
    As her arousal continues elsewhere...

    If her lover does not return
    Her satisfaction will be in her own hand

    Author: Paul Curtis
     
  20. BlackMasterJay

    BlackMasterJay Well-Known Member

    Be honest tam......you watched that Halloween simpson episode didnt you?

     

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