Short Film on YourTube

[designer]

In my other life I belong to a few digital cinema organizations. One member made this short.

Not bad no?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-RsN0CTTpVo

 

[jxsilicon9]

In my other life I belong to a few digital cinema organizations. One member made this short.

Not bad no?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-RsN0CTTpVo

That was good. A little too much voiceover and the look up part was bad. Also casting the Australian guy. But other then those it was a good short film.

 

[OmahaBoy2003]

Niiice.

 

[JAYKLEN+]

Can somebody enlighten me, it's screwedup storythe the wf whom we thought was dead was not. At the end she kills her BM while he was taking vengeance on her behalf !!!!!!!

 

[jxsilicon9]

Can somebody enlighten me, it's screwedup storythe the wf whom we thought was dead was not. At the end she kills her BM while he was taking vengeance on her behalf !!!!!!!

Its film noir. And we see the film through his perspective. We don't know why she killed him because he doesn't.

 

[designer]

Jxsilicon9 you hit the nail on the head twice!

The filmmaker asked us [a group of professional, independent and amateur filmmakers] to critique his short and his overuse of narration and the acting were the biggest drawbacks. A few people mentioned the continuity [the look up thing].
Overall his direction, editing, lighting and settings were good. This was a college project and his objective was to convey a mood.
A postmodern film nior.

Jxsilicon9... Good observations.
Maybe you should be in the business if you're not already!! 8)